Romance Manuscript Evaluation
now taking manuscript evaluation projects for July 2025
Manuscript evaluations will diagnose your book's issues and give you general advice on how to fix them. It's not as detailed as a developmental edit, and you won't receive in-line manuscript feedback, but if you're looking to give your book a general polish at an affordable price, this service is for you!
Manuscript evaluations are especially great if you:
-want to submit your romance novel to traditional publishers, and are looking to polish your manuscript prior to submission, or
-are self-publishing your romance novel and can't afford a full developmental edit, but still want an expert pair of eyes to assess your manuscript's strengths and weaknesses
When I do manuscript evaluations, I look for genre-specific issues related to romance plot structure, character development, tropes, and reader and sub-genre expectations, as well as more general fiction issues like:
-your book's hook
-pacing
-narrative arc
-narrative continuity
-POV
-chapter openers, closers, and transitions
-chapter length
-showing vs. telling
-repetition
-tone
-dialogue
-patterns of grammar, spelling, and language errors (to help you self-edit)
Price:
10,000-50,000 word manuscripts: $250/£195
51,000-100,000-word manuscripts: $300/£233