When I do a developmental edit on a romance novel, I look at 4 things:
-story structure
-main characters and their development
-internal and external conflict

-use of tropes
 
I make sure every element is as strong as it can be to draw readers into your story and keep them hooked until the very end.  

Any suggestions I make come with specific examples to show you exactly how to tweak a scene or chapter, and why it will improve the story. My goal is to make the editing process as painless as possible; because you're writing romance for fun and joy, and every step of the process should be full of both, don't you think? 


Price: 

$0.01/£.0078 per word